TreasurePlanet's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dr. Doom Tribute]

spiiderman is really hard to draw. I like your drawing of spiderman enough but because of his costume it is really easy to see where you went wrong with the shape of his chest and head.
the spiderwebs have to mimic the shape of his body.

also his neck is off. you might say that it looks that way because dr. doom is squeezing him, but to get his neck that distorted doom would be practically killing him. crippled spidey after this.

doom is pretty solid. I would make his left hand stand out more. Because it blends in too much with the arm behind it.

all in all good work! spiderman is insanely hard to draw and I like the folds, and value change on doom

Chessplay responds:

Thanks, the webbing pattern was tricky to have follow his body shape. I know exactly what you mean for the neck, especially since Doom isn't supposed to be squeezing his neck at all, he's supposed to be holding it and forcing him to look him in the eyes (hence why the index finger is hidden at the back of his head and the hand isn't on his throat as if to choke). Anyways, thanks for that.

[Sleeping with the Flying Fish]

oh wow!!

the focus is really clear in this piece. The repetition of circles within the balloon was a great idea to create a focus.

The opposites in this are really interesting too. Not so much colors (because there's no green.) but in the mood of the colors vs. the sleeping figure. This would be a terrible dream and the fact that they are sleeping through it makes it even more dreamlike.

ALSO I just noticed that there is another figure in the bed. lots of nice detail!

Merol responds:

There is a little of green in one of those streamer things the balloon has! Kinda.

And how comes you missed the sleeping girl? She's not even hidden or anything!

Thank you very much!!

[Heart of the Swamp]

nice!!

i really like the concept and how you made a heart look swamplike.

[Michelle and Izzy's Landscape]

like the colors and how you made them fit a mood.

I also really like the way you draw clouds and smoke!

Izzy-A responds:

Michelle said they look like brains...

[mermaidman and barnacleboy]

the coloring is pro!!!
I always loved the realistic closeups that spongebob would occasionally go into

I really dig the shading and coloring on mermaid man

[Leave the other half]

I like the reverse of "down the rabbit hole"
the rabbit is also very well done. I like the smooth coloring and the bellybotton is a creepy touch

[Smiling-Sad-Screaming]

Wow
really love just about everything in this. I really like the evolution of chaos in the backgrounds and how the hair works in each individual frame as well as flowing throughout all the frames.

[A Bear fighting a squid]

Lucky friend!
I sometimes get requests for things like "something vs. something" I usually blow them off as impossible and not worth it. But this.... this is awesome!

Bear vs. Squid? fuck yeah. sure. why not?

[Portrait of Red]

nice render and painting skills.

[Adieu]

looks dope.

there might be too manythings happening in the background.
The close ups of the snowflakes makes it more interesting though

Knocturne responds:

Hehe those are supposed to be stylized stars! Guess I should not simplify some things, thanks dude