TreasurePlanet's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Crack-Ups 1]

yeah

this was funny and well thought out/directed
good job.

[Sweatshop Diaries]

creepy

i like the story and the art.
im not sure i can grasp the full concept.
but i like it alot

[Greeting Card]

lol

the sound effects are WAAAAY to loud in the beginning.
it also pauses too long n certain places.

[--THE JAM--]

nice

when the bass player dropped in and he was black hahaha
syncing with the sound dude.
cool

ImCoolerThanYou responds:

Lol someone in my class said the same thing about him being black

[Death Before Breakfast!!]

voice acting

the voices are the best part.
the crying was funny : )

[Talkshow: Bacon Short]

lol

it was funny in some parts and sloppy in others.
all around it wasn't a waste of time.
the sound was delayed in some areas.
but the voice acting was decent.

[Vlikevince's Room]

nice

i like the surrealness of it all.
the room and the window are all great metaphors. But it would help to develop it a little bit more. The contrasting colors, red and black, those are good ways of getting a stroy across.
some of the frames had white slivers, like your pictures were not big enough and it let a little of the background showing.
a good way of preventing that is to upload it to your, "Dumping grounds" to see if it all pans out correctly.

VlikeVince responds:

thanks for the hint

[The Muse Coffee Ad2]

sure sure

it looked really simple and easy to make.
but it was a good ad.
the list took a little long.
and the peace sign confused me, because i ussually see it like this: http://bplteenblog.files.wordpress.co m/2009/10/peace-sign.jpg

i think your peace sign was a mercedes logo?
i dunno.

also i think the "drug" aspect was capitalized when you were listing how coffee makes you feel.
i could have replace coffee with weed and it would have worked.

Streetproject responds:

Thanks, fixed the peace sign.

Also, it is part of advertising to tell the audience how to feel I guess. Plus, if you knew the store, it is very "homey" and they will do there best to let you feel loved and cared for. Learned a lot of interesting things like that from this class. Thanks for the input.